Would love to have a beta, basically just a second pair of eyes to read over my completed origfic and let me know if it works, what can be ironed out, etc. I'm not really looking for anyone to nitpick over SPAG bc my fic is hideously long and it'd be a feat enough if you could just read it over and help with the storyline and things. Please PM me if you can help :D
Title: Gladiolus Wreath (working title) Fandom: Original Work Rating: Explicit (porn) Word count: 57k Summary: When commoner Aurel meets King Garland, it is love at first sight - at least, according to Garland, who immediately proposes marriage to him. King Garland's blue eyes are as innocent as a child's, but Aurel is sure his motives are not, and he's right - in more ways than one.
I'm looking mostly for someone to tell me about whether the plot/pacing/characterization works. The fic is long and there isn't much time left before the deadline so a tight SpaG overlook seems like too much to ask, but since I'm ESL it would be nice to have a beta who could have an eye out for odd phrasing at least.
Fandom: Kuroshitsuji Wordcount: 55k Rating: PG13 or something. The characters are underage (but still aged up from the manga) but don't do more than make out. Ship: Ciel/Elizabeth/Sieglinde Summary: April 1893. Elizabeth convinces Ciel that he needs a break. Along with their friend Sieglinde, they decide to visit the city of Bath for a restful few days. But a ghost story and then a murder come disturb that plan, and when Ciel is asked his help on the investigation Elizabeth and Sieglinde are dragged into it too.
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Date: 2017-08-04 04:47 am (UTC)Would love to have a beta, basically just a second pair of eyes to read over my completed origfic and let me know if it works, what can be ironed out, etc. I'm not really looking for anyone to nitpick over SPAG bc my fic is hideously long and it'd be a feat enough if you could just read it over and help with the storyline and things. Please PM me if you can help :D
Title: Gladiolus Wreath (working title)
Fandom: Original Work
Rating: Explicit (porn)
Word count: 57k
Summary: When commoner Aurel meets King Garland, it is love at first sight - at least, according to Garland, who immediately proposes marriage to him. King Garland's blue eyes are as innocent as a child's, but Aurel is sure his motives are not, and he's right - in more ways than one.
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Date: 2017-09-03 01:13 pm (UTC)Fandom: Kuroshitsuji
Wordcount: 55k
Rating: PG13 or something. The characters are underage (but still aged up from the manga) but don't do more than make out.
Ship: Ciel/Elizabeth/Sieglinde
Summary: April 1893. Elizabeth convinces Ciel that he needs a break. Along with their friend Sieglinde, they decide to visit the city of Bath for a restful few days. But a ghost story and then a murder come disturb that plan, and when Ciel is asked his help on the investigation Elizabeth and Sieglinde are dragged into it too.
PM me if you're interested!