I'm looking mostly for someone to tell me about whether the plot/pacing/characterization works. The fic is long and there isn't much time left before the deadline so a tight SpaG overlook seems like too much to ask, but since I'm ESL it would be nice to have a beta who could have an eye out for odd phrasing at least.
Fandom: Kuroshitsuji Wordcount: 55k Rating: PG13 or something. The characters are underage (but still aged up from the manga) but don't do more than make out. Ship: Ciel/Elizabeth/Sieglinde Summary: April 1893. Elizabeth convinces Ciel that he needs a break. Along with their friend Sieglinde, they decide to visit the city of Bath for a restful few days. But a ghost story and then a murder come disturb that plan, and when Ciel is asked his help on the investigation Elizabeth and Sieglinde are dragged into it too.
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Date: 2017-09-03 01:13 pm (UTC)Fandom: Kuroshitsuji
Wordcount: 55k
Rating: PG13 or something. The characters are underage (but still aged up from the manga) but don't do more than make out.
Ship: Ciel/Elizabeth/Sieglinde
Summary: April 1893. Elizabeth convinces Ciel that he needs a break. Along with their friend Sieglinde, they decide to visit the city of Bath for a restful few days. But a ghost story and then a murder come disturb that plan, and when Ciel is asked his help on the investigation Elizabeth and Sieglinde are dragged into it too.
PM me if you're interested!